Sample scripts

Each of these began as a short brief in BeatBandit. Read the opening pages below, or download the full PDFs.

Feature film · Sci-fi drama · Feature Film templatePolished first draft

Station One

Brief

Station One, the first commercial space station, is being shut down after 22 years and will be crashed into the ocean at Point Nemo. Its last occupant is Ines Vasquez, 54, the chief engineer, who volunteered to do the 30-day shutdown alone. Eleven years ago her younger brother Tomas died outside the hull during an accident — Ines was the one who sealed the airlock with him still outside, to save the rest of the crew. She has kept the station running ever since. A few days before she's due to leave, she hears three knocks on the hull, the way Tomas used to knock on her door when they were kids. Ground control thinks she's cracking. What's knocking is the maintenance robot Tomas built, which everyone thought was destroyed in the accident. It has been crawling around the outside of the station for eleven years, repairing it under Tomas's orders — and it holds a recording of what Tomas said while she closed the door. Sci-fi drama, eerie and tender, about letting go.

Tone

Writing voice: Intimate Naturalism. 83 pages, 36 scenes, 8 sequences.

The project you follow on the home page. Beat Wizard → Scene Wizard → Writer Wizard, one sequence at a time, then a polish pass (a Thorne character rewrite and cleanup).

Opening pages
INT. STATION ONE - CUPOLA - ORBITAL DAY

Silence.

Then, under it, the slow mechanical breath of an air
scrubber. Push. Pause. Push.

A red grease pencil drifts across a scratched viewport.
Beyond the glass, the blue curve of Earth. Cloud moving over
open water, four hundred kilometers down.

A hand comes up and closes around the pencil. Nobody looked.

INES VASQUEZ, 54. Gray hair cropped close and uneven at the
back, like she did it herself with the wrong scissors.
Weathered, wiry. Grease worked into the edges of her nails.

Across her left palm, a thick band of white scar tissue.
Shiny. Puckered at the edges.

She wears an oversized green fleece vest over her
flightsuit. On the chest, a rectangle of darker fabric and a
row of tiny stitch holes where a name tag used to be.

A brass torque wrench rides her right thigh on a short
lanyard. The knurled handle is rubbed bright.

She hooks a toe under a handrail and faces an aluminum
placard bolted to the console.

STATION ONE - DE-ORBIT SEQUENCE - PHASE 1. Twenty-odd lines.
Most already ticked.

Above it, a digital clock: T-MINUS 47:58:12.

She uncaps the pencil with her teeth. Finds her line: CUPOLA
BULKHEAD SEALS - VERIFY/TAG.

She runs her thumb along the window gasket. Presses. Moves
six inches. Presses again. She works her way all the way
around the frame without skipping a section.

One spot she presses twice.

Then she ticks the line. A small, hard mark.

She caps the pencil and sticks it to a strip of Velcro on
the console, next to a row of others, each one worn down to
a stub.

Earth rolls past below her. She doesn't look at it.

She pushes off toward the aft hatch. The wrench swings on
its lanyard and knocks the hatch frame on the way through. A
Feature film · Adventure / heist · Multi-Genre Feature Film template

Robin Hood and the Impossible Heist

Brief

Robin must steal back a royal treasure from three castles in one night, but every member of the Merry Men has a different terrible plan.

Tone

Pirates of the Caribbean + Ocean's Eleven + medieval banter.

Opening pages
EXT. GREAT NORTH ROAD - DAWN

Fog to the knees. A tax convoy stands dead on the road: four
wagons, a dozen GUARDS kneeling on the verge, their swords
piled out of reach like kindling.

One man works the strongboxes. ROBIN OF LOXLEY,
mid-thirties, weathered, forearms corded from the bow, a
deep hood over forgettable brown wool. He moves down the
wagon line like a man laying a table for guests.

                           ROBIN
            Step six. The strap, not the lock.
            Locks are for admirers.

His knife parts the strap. Coin sacks slide into panniers on
a grey mare, one at a time, each weighed in his hand before
it drops.

A young CLERK stands by the lead wagon, trembling, charcoal
moving on a scrap of paper anyway -- sketching the robber
out of pure habit.

In the treeline: five armed men crouch in bracken. LITTLE
JOHN, a wall with a beard, mouths: NOW? Beside him WILL
SCARLET, ALAN-A-DALE, MUCH, FRIAR TUCK. Bows strung. Nothing
to shoot.

Robin, without turning his head, lifts a flat palm toward
the trees.

Wait.

John sinks back into the wet ferns. Tuck sneezes into his
sleeve, twice. Nobody blesses him.

                           GUARD SERGEANT
                    (kneeling)
            The escort is a mile back. You're one
            man.

                           ROBIN
            One is the whole trick, sergeant. Two
            men can contradict each other.

He hefts the next sack, frowns at its weight, sets it in the
pannier and tucks a loose coin back under the strap, the way
you'd right a crooked picture on a wall.

                           ROBIN (CONT'D)
            Step seven -- the mare comes with me.
            She's wasted on the exchequer.
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                                                                         2.

He unhitches the grey mare, murmurs something in her ear.
She follows him like he paid her.

                           GUARD SERGEANT
            They'll hang you by Michaelmas.

                           ROBIN
            A wager, then. Take me by Lauds
            tomorrow and I'll tie the knot myself.
            Lose, and every man kneeling here gets
            a Sunday off at your expense.

The sergeant stares at him. The joke lies down and dies on
the wet road.

In the ferns, Will draws a thumb across his own throat --
OURS? -- and jerks his chin at the sergeant. Robin's palm
comes up again without a glance. Down.

Robin carries on, undiscouraged. Passing the clerk, he
plucks the sketch from his fingers. Studies it. Genuinely
wounded.

                           ROBIN (CONT'D)
            The hood doesn't sit like that. It
            breaks here -- off the brow.

He turns the scrap so the clerk can see, taps the line.

                           ROBIN (CONT'D)
            You've made me a monk.

He corrects the drawing with the clerk's own charcoal, hands
it back, and steps off the road into the fog.

Gone.

The kneeling guards look at each other. Nobody wants to
stand first.

In the treeline, five armed men rise out of the bracken with
nothing to do. John looks at his staff, un-swung, then at
the empty road where the fog is already closing.

EXT. SHERWOOD CAMP - NIGHT

Firelight through old oaks. A WEDDING PARTY in patched wool
-- a BRIDE in a borrowed veil, her GROOM grinning around two
missing teeth -- eats venison off spits with both hands. The
crew serves them like lords.

WILL SCARLET kneels at the bride's hem, needle flashing, a
spool of crimson thread clamped in his teeth. He tilts a
shard of mirror from his pouch, checks the line of his own
TV pilot · Historical drama · TV Episodic 60 min template

No House But The King

Brief

Medieval Europe in the era of Otto the Great. A restless wanderer and skilled fighter, nephew to a rebellious duke with no future in his house, defects to Otto — and falls into a dangerous court romance with a woman promised to another man.

Tone

The Tudors — court intrigue, family betrayal, restrained prestige drama.

Opening pages
INT. EBERHARD'S HALL - DAWN

A clerk's reed pen scratches over a charter. Wax waits in a
brass spoon above a small flame.

LIUTGER OF WEILBURG, late twenties, stands among kin in
travel-stained wool. His right hand bears an empty signet
ring. The hollow face catches firelight.

DUKE EBERHARD OF FRANCONIA sits in the high chair, broad
under a cloak pinned with a boar clasp. Hounds crowd his
boots for scraps from his plate.

                         CLERK
            The lower mill at Nassau, with
            meadow and fishing right, to
            Conrad, son of Adelbert.

A young cousin steps forward. Eberhard presses two fingers to
the boy's brow. The hall murmurs approval.

Liutger keeps his hands folded. A leather cord of account
knots hangs at his belt. His thumb finds one knot, tightens
it.
                         CLERK  (CONT’D)
            The vineyards above Lahnstein,
            owing three carts at harvest, to
            Meinhard.

Another cousin. Younger. Red-cheeked. Landed now.

RUDOLF, a hard-faced count in a clean cloak, watches Liutger
more than the grants.

Eberhard takes the charter. His cloak hem turns in his fist;
something sewn inside clicks against his ring.
                         CLERK  (CONT’D)
            For Weilburg--

Liutger's fingers stop.
                         CLERK  (CONT’D)
            --stewardship remains under ducal
            hand until further counsel.

A small sound moves through the hall. Not shock. Measurement.

Liutger looks at Eberhard.

Eberhard does not look away.

                         EBERHARD
            The house keeps what the house must
            keep.

Rudolf lowers his eyes to hide a smile.
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                                                                     2.

Liutger steps forward. Every cousin shifts to see whether he
will speak.

He bows.

Low enough.

As he rises, he turns the empty signet inward against his
palm.

Eberhard comes down from the chair and takes Liutger by the
back of the neck. Public warmth. Firm fingers.
                         EBERHARD   (CONT’D)
            My boy. Patience feeds longer than
            anger.

                         LIUTGER
            Then I will eat patience, lord.

Eberhard's thumb presses once at his nape before letting go.

The clerk sands the charter. Liutger returns to the line of
men with his ring hidden.

EXT. EBERHARD'S STABLE YARD - MORNING

Wet straw smokes in a dung fire. Saddles hang under the
eaves. Servants drag trunks toward packhorses.

Eberhard steps into the yard. Men stop moving.

                         EBERHARD
            Leave the grey saddled. The rest,
            out.

Servants scatter. A groom hesitates over a girth.

                         RUDOLF
            Out means out.

The groom goes.

Liutger appears at the far side with a torn riding glove,
needle tucked between his teeth. He stays half behind a post.

Rudolf takes a folded strip from his sleeve. Eberhard gives
the smallest nod.

Rudolf feeds the strip into the dung fire.

The edge blackens. For one breath the ink holds: OTTO...
VIA... FORD...

Liutger's needle stops.
Feature film · Folk horror · Multi-Genre Feature Film template

The Harvest Guest

Brief

A control-freak palliative nurse returns to a remote island to move her dying father to a mainland hospice — and learns the harvest festival cannot begin until someone of her family volunteers to be 'the guest', a role last played twenty years ago by her mother.

Tone

The Wicker Man + Midsommar — daylight dread, community warmth as menace, no gore.

Opening pages
INT. MAINLAND HOSPICE - ROOM 12 - BEFORE DAWN

A vinyl visitor chair stands open beside the bed.

ELIN MORA, late 30s, lean, scrub top under a zipped fleece,
strides in with a steel dish, gloves, a paper cup of crushed
ice. Trauma shears clip her pocket. A penlight rides the
other side.

A DYING MAN lies under a thin blanket. The pump clicks.
Weather crackles from a wall radio in the corridor -- gulls,
then a flat voice under static.

Elin checks the chart at the foot of the bed, finds no pen,
writes a time across the back of her glove.

The dying man's daughter sleeps folded in the chair, chin on
chest.

Elin touches her shoulder.

                           ELIN
            You can use the family room for twenty.

The daughter jerks awake.

                           DAUGHTER
            I was just --

                           ELIN
            He's settled. Go wash your face.

The daughter looks to the bed, to Elin, obeys. She gathers
her cardigan and goes.

The dying man turns his head toward the empty corner by the
wardrobe.

                           DYING MAN
            Hello, love.

Elin follows his eyeline. Wardrobe. Coat hook. Nothing.

                           DYING MAN (CONT'D)
            You're early.

Elin slips on gloves, checks the line, presses the tape down
where it has lifted.

                           ELIN
            Any pain now?

                           DYING MAN
            No. She's wet through.
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                                                                        2.

Elin tightens the roller clamp a notch, watches the drip
chamber.

The corridor radio sharpens for a second.

                           RADIO (O.S.)
            ... ferry warning in the Minch from
            first light. Gusts building around St.
            Brannan --

Elin stills only long enough to hear the island name. Her
thumb goes back to the clamp.

She lifts the blanket, smooths a crease near the man's knee,
checks his catheter bag, straightens the oxygen tubing over
the rail.

                           DYING MAN
            You hear that?

                           ELIN
            I hear you breathing easier.

She takes the cup, chips a piece of ice into his mouth.

                           DYING MAN
            Said she'd wait by the door.

                           ELIN
            Don't talk. Save your mouth.

His hand drifts off the sheet. Elin places it back on top,
palm down, then reaches for the visitor chair.

In the corridor, a phone begins to buzz against a hard
surface.

Elin folds the chair flat with one motion and sets it
against the wall.

She crosses to the door, catches her buzzing phone from the
medication cart outside. Screen lit: ISLAND CLINIC.

She looks back once.

The dying man faces the wardrobe, mouth parted toward the
hook.

Elin shuts the door.

INT. MAINLAND HOSPICE - LOCKER ROOM - BEFORE DAWN

Metal doors. Damp cuffs over a radiator. Elin shoulders in,
phone at her ear, yanks her locker open.
Novel · 22 chapters · 68,000 words · Novel Adaptation template

The Harvest Guest — the novel

Brief

The Harvest Guest screenplay above, adapted into an adult novel.

Tone

Atmospheric close-third prose, chapter lengths led by the story.

Opening

Chapter 1 · The Folded Chair

At 04:12, the dying man’s breathing lost its pattern.

Elin counted anyway. Twenty-eight seconds, then eleven, then a shallow draw that shifted the blanket without lifting his sternum. The syringe driver continued its measured push. No occlusion warning, no leak around the cannula, no change in the dose prescribed for pain. His face had released around the medicine. Whatever else was happening, he was not struggling.

His daughter slept in the vinyl visitor chair with her chin on her chest and one hand closed around his wrist. She had been holding the place where his pulse ran, though it was too thin now for an untrained hand to follow. Her thumb moved over the same inch of skin each time she stirred.

Elin set a steel dish and a paper cup of crushed ice on the bedside cabinet. The room was overheated. Rain clicked against the sealed window, and a wet coat hung from the bathroom hook, giving off the mineral smell of pavement. Beyond the door, the corridor radio moved between static, gull cries and the flat recital of coastal weather. She checked the chart at the foot of the bed. The pen was missing again. She wrote the time across the back of her glove, then pressed down the edge of the clear dressing where it had begun to lift.

The man opened his eyes.

They passed over his daughter and Elin. He looked toward the empty corner between the wardrobe and the door.

“Hello, love,” he whispered.

Elin followed his gaze. A handwashing notice, a coat hook and a length of cream wall stood there. The linoleum beneath them was dry.

“You’re early,” he said.

Keep reading

His daughter woke with a start. “Dad?”

He did not turn toward her.

Elin touched the daughter’s shoulder. “You can use the family room for twenty minutes. Wash your face. I’ll settle him.”

“I was only resting my eyes.”

“You’ve been in that chair since midnight.”

“I can stay.”

“You can.” Elin took the daughter’s hand from his wrist and laid it on the blanket, where the warmth would be easier to feel. “He’s comfortable. There’s fresh tea down the corridor.”

Both statements were true. Neither required the daughter to leave.

The woman looked from Elin to her father. Her cardigan had slipped from one shoulder, and a red seam marked her cheek where it had rested against the chair. “Come and get me if he changes.”

“I will.”

Elin held the door while she went. The daughter glanced back once before turning toward the family room, walking with the unsteady care of someone who had forgotten the arrangement of her own limbs.

The man’s eyes remained fixed on the corner.

“Any pain now?” Elin asked.

Vertical micro-drama · 50 episodes · Micro-Drama Series template

Sweep

Brief

Stripped of her name and fortune overnight, a fallen heiress takes a job cleaning the penthouse of the billionaire who ruined her family. Seduction as a weapon on both sides, a jealous fiancée with her own agenda, a will nobody has read.

Tone

Full-blooded revenge romance — hidden identities, power reversals, a cliffhanger every episode.

Opening pages
                    EPISODE 1 -- THE PHOTOGRAPH

INT. DAMIAN'S BEDROOM - NIGHT

A cleaner's cart blocks the open door. Fresh towels. Tiny
sewing kits. A master key clipped beneath the handle.

IVY, gray uniform immaculate, lifts a silver frame from
beside the untouched bed.

The photograph shows IVY MARCH before the fall, laughing
beneath a March Hotel awning.

She pulls off one glove finger by finger. Her bare thumb
crosses her photographed face.

The bedroom door shuts.

DAMIAN stands against it, white shirt open at the throat.

                           DAMIAN
            That isn't dusting.

Ivy slides the photograph behind her back.

                           IVY
            Your staff handbook permits judgment
            calls.

                           DAMIAN
            Show me.

                           IVY
            It is a photograph.

                           DAMIAN
            Yes.

He waits. Ivy sets it facedown on the nightstand and reaches
for her cart.

Damian turns the lock.

                           DAMIAN (CONT'D)
            Your name.

                           IVY
            Eve Gray.

                           DAMIAN
            Again.
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                                                                        2.

                           IVY
            Eve. Gray.

He crosses to the nightstand and returns the frame to its
exact place. His attention drops to the pale ring around her
bare finger.

Ivy pulls on the glove. The fabric catches over the scar.

A KNOCK.

LENA enters with a tablet and cold cinnamon tea.

                           LENA
            Security needs a disposition.
            Terminated or reassigned. I have thirty
            seconds.

Ivy reaches for the cart.

                           DAMIAN
            Reassigned.

                           LENA
            Floor?

                           DAMIAN
            Here. My bedroom. Every night.

                           IVY
            Sir, I clean six rooms on the executive
            rotation.

                           DAMIAN
            Now you clean one.

                           LENA
            Access level?

Damian takes the master key from Ivy's cart. He closes her
gloved hand around it, his thumb pressing the scar beneath
the cloth.

                           DAMIAN
            Only when I'm present.

Lena enters the change. Ivy's cart remains trapped between
Damian and the locked door.
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